Globalisation is a phenomenon resulting in the
world becoming integrated and interdependent. The world has become a global
market as manufacturing, assembling and purchasing of products occur all over the world. Many
companies are outsourcing to take advantage of cheaper labor in other
countries.
Today, products are sold globally. In Singapore, a
supermarket sells a variety of food and household products imported from
countries such as China, America, Malaysia and many more. With such a diverse
range to choose from, one is spoilt for choice. However, in the recent years, the
number of food scandals have risen. In 2007, Chinese frozen meat and
vegetable dumplings containing pesticide caused food poisoning in Japan
(Chanda, 2013). With the rise in food scandals occurring around Singapore, the
Singapore government has to tighten regulations and ensure testing methods are
secure to protect consumers from being affected by contaminated food from
global sources.
Horsemeat was detected in frozen beef burgers in
mid January. France beef meals tainted with horsemeat were treated as beef when
it was sold from Romania to other countries and eventually back to France. Beef
ready meals in other parts of Europe have been recalled after investigation
showed horsemeat in them. The UK Food Standards Agency was criticized and
doubted after this incident (BBC, 2013). Consumer confidence in labels has to
be restored as a result.
In 2008, melamine contaminated milk products took
the lives of at least 6 children and caused 300,000 children to fall ill
(Branigan, 2009). Singapore, Malaysia, Japan and Hong Kong made a move to ban
and recall Chinese dairy products in 2008 (Klamann, 2008). Tainted food can
bring about serious health consequences as seen in this example. Food safety
should not be taken for granted. Singapore is highly reliant on imported food thus
there is a high risk of being susceptible to food scandals (Tan, 2013).
Singapore has to be alert in ensuring that imports are safe for consumption.
The Agri-Food & Veterinary Authority of
Singapore (AVA) has strict requirements for imported and locally manufactured
food to comply with. Imports with high risks are required to be sent for
testing to certify the safety of the imported food (Singapore customs, 2013).
The government also encourages with the food industry to guarantee the safety
of food provided through awarding food safety excellence and food safety
partners’ awards for their commitment.
Harmful products will continuously arise
as producers find ways to cut costs by using cheap chemicals as substitutes or
when animal epidemics occur. The government has to ensure that methods used to
test for poisonous substances in imported food are constantly reliable and
upgraded. Animals imported should also continue to be strictly controlled and certified to prevent
diseases from being introduced into the country. The AVA should also work
closely with food safety authorities internationally to share information and
work on protecting the health of consumers. This way, when a certain food is
found to be affecting the health of consumers, the food safety authority of
that country can pass information regarding the food scandal on to food
safety authorities in other countries immediately to prevent the problem from
escalating. In preventing contaminated food from being consumed, issues such as consumers distrust arising from unethical selling of
tainted food would not exist.
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